IELTS Diagram: Model
Answer Band Score 9
Below
is an IELTS diagram model answer which is estimated at band score 9. It is
possible to have a diagram in your IELTS writing task 1 academic paper. A
diagram is also known as a process. This is from IELTS Cambridge Book 8, Test
3.
The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the
cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building
purposes.
Diagram Model Answer
The
diagrams illustrate the way in which cement is made and how it is then used in
the process of making concrete. Overall, limestone and clay pass through four
stages before being bagged ready for use as cement which then accounts for 15%
of the four materials used to produce concrete. While the process of making
cement uses a number of tools, the production of concrete requires only a
concrete mixer.
In the
first stage of making cement, limestone and clay are crushed together to form a
powder. This powder is then combined in a mixer before passing into a rotating
heater which has constant heat applied at one end of the tube. The resulting
mixture is ground in order to produce cement. The final product is afterwards
put into bags ready to be used.
Regarding
the second diagram, concrete consists of mainly gravel, which is small stones,
and this makes up 50% of the ingredients. The other materials used are sand
(25%), cement (15%) and water (10%). These are all poured into a concrete mixer
which continually rotates to combine the materials and ultimately produces concrete.
Comments: This
diagram gives a concise introduction. The overview contains key features of
both diagrams and also highlights the connection between them. The body
paragraphs are organised well and linking devices are used flexibly and
accurately. Each body paragraphs explained the steps of each process in a
logical order. Complex sentences are accurate and there is also passive voice
used. Collocations are well used.
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